When it’s all gone,
You realize it’s importance,
It’s like a kaleidoscope,
Of things,You could do,
To achieve it,
But then you realize,
You did work hard,
And it was almost in your hands,
But it was given to somebody else,
Someone,who didn’t do,
Anything to achieve it,
Someone who never bothered,
About the thing,
Which was precious to you,
Like a gem,
You cry hard,For your loss,
And people tell you,
It wasn’t in your box,
You try to accept it,
But Its so hard,
Isn’t it?
Is that how you feel?
When that one thing,
You wanted,
Is GONE.
This reminds me of so much of a job I had for many years.
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Aww..😊
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Both the good and the bad.
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I’m really glad you could relate to it,and I’m sorry if it made you feel sad or bad. 🙂
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Even I remember my previous job too
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I’m so sorry,for that. 🙂
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It’s okay 🙂 thanks for your concern
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These lines narrate exactly how I felt when I lost a contract.
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Well,I’m sorry for your loss. 🙂
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Yayy! Thankyou so much! :*
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We think
We are the ONE
We are almost there
But unexpectedly
G joins the ONE
To say GONE.
At times we feel we are almost there and start to live in the moment but suddenly everything turns upside down:(. It hurts a lot.
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It’s actually the truth whatyouve said.
Maybe we can work more harder to make The G disappear in our life,so that we are the only ONE.
But I also agree with you,It hurts a lot and it feels so hard to move on. 🙂
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I can relate to this so well, All the moments missed that I could of seized, you just spoke my thoughts perfectly 🙂
Thank you for following my blog 🙂
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I am so glad that you could relate to it. 🙂
Your blogs are amazing and Thankyou for reading and following my blog too. 🙂
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My pleasure…! So many beautiful posts with so much emotions infused 🙂
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Bitter truth of life very well put. It is these experiences that we learn from also. That thing may have been gone but it leaves after teaching you many other things. A quote that I truly believe in: “Success comes from experience and experience comes from failure”. I must say, you have a beautiful talent of expressing your thoughts and I hope to get there myself as I get more time to write down my thoughts. I just realized that I have the same title as one of your work. Hope to read more of it, enjoy and keep shining.
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Yes,we all do have some hurting experiences in life,That was a lovely quote thanks for sharing it. 🙂
We have the same titled poem,It sounds different though.
I liked you work more than anyone. 🙂
Hope to read more of your blogs. 🙂
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I am glad you liked it, means a lot.
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I like to think that people who get something that I really wanted not only deserved it, but needed it more than me. I tell myself this to make myself feel better whenever I lose (which, by the way, is 99.999993% of the time; yes, I ran the numbers).
And then I come to a realization that perhaps I don’t really need what I wanted.
And then I wonder if the loss I’m feeling is more about the loss of what I was imagining rather than the reality of what was actually going to be.
And then I wonder what better thing will come along now that there is space for it to fit into my life.
And then I smile in expectation of that better thing. 🙂
Great poem! Loved it! 🙂
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Yes,I totally agree with every line you’ve said.
And I’ve learned to accept things what I’m getting from my life,And trying to work hard in it and stay happy as well.
Thankyou so much for sharing what you felt in your heart. 🙂
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Thank you for sharing. 🙂
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Thankyou for reading. 🙂
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Thank you for responding. 🙂
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I may be wrong, but I have this feeling that you wrote this post with lost love in mind! Did you? 😉
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No,not really. 🙂
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What then? 😛
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Oh dear,here it is.
I did not get admission in the course I wanted even though I had good marks,but someone who scored very very less than me got it (I don’t know how)
I couldn’t question,I couldn’t fight.I Just stayed back and watched my dream college go from my hands. 🙂
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Yes..we all have these moments…then we take stock and move on
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Yes,we do.And we have no other option left rather than to move on. 🙂
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Aww..Thankyou so much. 🙂
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You’re welcome
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Such truth in your words to any loss..
I really enjoyed it
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Thankyou so much,means a lot to me. 🙂
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Life is unfair at times. 😦 Beautifully written btw 🙂
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Yes,It is.
Thankyou so much. 🙂
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drish…….I don’t think I should say anything about how I can relate thiz wid my life……….””’ you very well know this……”GONE” a big word drish which you used” u won’t need such article to elaborate this word””””‘ it itself speaks a lot…….atleast foh me it is ; truly reminds me of my past with some one which I can’t forget! !!!!!!!! so thankz to you dear one”drish” foh updating again a mind blowing n vry heart touching blog “”””……..^_^
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Haha,Yes I know How it feels to lose precious things,because of one mistake.
Thanks for reading it Pawan. 🙂
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It waz indeed one hell of a mistake ; ( can’t overcome upon it………….. n watz der for thanking me of”””””’your blog always mesmerizes me and makes me happy and motivating ^_^ so thanks to you dear one
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I have nominated you for the Sunshine Blogger Award. Here is the link: http://readitswhatsmartpeopledo.com/2015/07/08/the-sunshine-blogger-award-2/
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Thankyou so much for nominating me. 🙂
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You are vey welcome and very deserving. Keep writing, girl! You have wonderful insight and a way with words. 🙂
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this is a beautiful poem… 🙂
I have nominated you for twin awards… check here…
https://ashishvision.wordpress.com/2015/07/08/dragons-royalty-premio-dardos-award/ 🙂
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Thankyou so much for nominating me. 🙂
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That’s really, super good. I feel that totally, but line by line it becomes a different memory — a connection of loss between them. Powerful stuff.
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Your words mean a lot to me,Thankyou so much. 🙂
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This so relatable ! 🙂
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I’m so glad.Thankyou so much! 🙂
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Hello Drishti,
This is in response to your earlier reply you gave about your true intentions of writing this piece of work (not getting admission). Now I am not going to say it will be alright and everything happens for good, keep working hard because you know all this and I am sure you did worked hard at the first place. I am not debunking these phrases, they are true in their own context. The worst thing to do in this situation is not do anything and think that you did everything and you don’t know why you did not get it (you may not know it now but thats what you have to find out). There has to be a reason why someone else got it and you did not (reason could be luck but I dont think it is good to assume this right away). Be honest with yourself and think where you could have lacked and improve on that aspect. The last thing you want to do is just repeat the same thing again that led you to not get in at the first place. You used the word “Gone” so maybe you will not be able to apply again for that program or college but finding out the reason will stop you from going through this experience again. Now I do not know what the situation is, they may have low marks but better in different aspect. It could be luck or being at the right situation at right time type of situation (as i said this should be the last reason to chose). Anyways, I thought this advice will help as I have been through the exact same situation not too long ago and I had the same initial thoughts as you do but a realization was made later that the other guy really deserved it (I was great in some aspects but not all). Was this for med school or something if you do not mind answering? I think I have extended this too much and it is probably getting boring but I feel there are lot of people ready to tell you what you want to hear rather than what the reality is or atleast that is what my experience is (yes, there are lot of great people to who genuinely want to help and all these comments are the proof). This is just my opinion and I am sure tumhari “drishti” is capable enough to discern between what is good for you or not.
Enjoy and sorry for the long post but I cannot stop myself from sharing things that may be able to help someone.
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Wow,Your words were so true and encouraging.
Thankyou for giving so much time and typing down this comment.Yes,I couldn’t get to the place I wanted to,And now maybe I don’t even want to be in that place.
I’m falling short of words to express how I feel,but this was so encouraging. 🙂
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I am very glad that you found it encouraging. You are just too kind to say that you are “short of words”. I did not say anything special, just something I came to realization after few events and if my actions have even a small chance of helping someone, I will be the first one there.
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No this wasn’t for med school,the cut off in all colleges is pretty high,and its hard to get into B.Tech IT in a good college,But now I’ve got a good college where I’m going to work hard. 🙂
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Congratulations, sometimes we may not understand why something is happening to us at the moment but in the future when you reflect on your life then all of the events start to make sense.
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It is seldom that we treasure or value things until they are no longer there. Like someone said, “things are to be used and people to be loved, but off late, we love things and use people ”
Because of this, usually, we end up missing and craving for people who are no longer in our lives 😦
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Whatever you said was 100% correct and true.I totally agree with you. 🙂
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Somethings are valued most only when lost.. makes me miss someone 😇
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Yes they are. 🙂
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😀😀😀
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Wow! This is wonderful. I have never seen such a poem to which I can relate so much for a long time.
In fact, it almost brought me to tears! You have CAPTURED every emotion, nice. ❤
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Thankyou so much,I’m feel so happy when people say they can relate to my poems. 🙂
And you almost had tears in your eyes..it’s so special for me. 🙂
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Really this one touches heart.
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Thankyou. 🙂
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I am recently starting to read your article s and these are amazing. I am totally going to read more.
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Thankyou so much.Now im off to read your blogs. 🙂
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Hope you like my blog and stories.
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So true and amazingly put 😦
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Thankyou,why a sad smiley? Be happy and always smile it looks good on you. 🙂
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Yeah, that is cool but when someone leaves us and we are all alone and deserted, for that the sad smiley but then we know that sooner or later, this empty place will be filled by someone else more deserving 😉 so now a smile smiley 🙂
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Yeah,I know that feeling.And they worst part is,they told us they won’t leave but then they change,and its so hard to accept and move on.But they were never ment to be with us,so cheer up forget them and be happy. 🙂
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Yes Dakshi, it’s ok and we can cherish the moments we spent together till the end of time 🙂 Some hurt will always keep nagging. We must be glad that it happened not be sad that it’s over. You are a true inspiration 🙂
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Its Drishti*
And Thankyou,I dint know I could inspire someone. 🙂
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I am sorry. Yes, Dristi. Mondays are always full of pressure and that confuses the mind. You and your poems are an inspiration 🙂
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I understand.Thanks again. 🙂
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Thank you 🙂
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Such a wealth of meaning conveyed in a handful of words.
Great poetry here
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Thankyou for your lovely comments. 🙂
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That is such a thoughtful poem! I love each and every word of it! You certainly know how to convey deep meanings in a few words! Loved it ❤
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I really Loved reading your comments and I read a few of your blogs and they’re really amazing,You are a really talented writer.
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Thank you very much! I appreciate the kind words 😀
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