Your silence is like a roar,
It says everything you couldn’t say,
And yet nobody can hear you out.
Your mind is like a sponge,
It absorbs as it observes too many people,
Maybe this is the reason,
For all your treasons.
Your hate is like a rumor,
Which is untrue and doesn’t exsist,
Yet you’re the one to be blamed and called by many names.
Your body is like a garden of roses,
Beautiful and fragile,
But the thorns may hurt them,
If they tried to hold you.
And your Love,your Love is eternal,
It will be with the one forever and always,
Till your name exists.
Tenderly yet strongly expressed. I like it.
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Thankyou so much! π
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Good poem. In the penultimate verse, I think you mean thorns
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Yes,Thankyou for the correction! π
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I really liked it so simple but true
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Thankyou! π
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Bahot dino baad … Very nice
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Yes,Thankuou! π
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Yes,Thankyou! π
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That was so beautiful and flowed really well π
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Thankyou so much! π
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After long time we were waiting for the new post welcome back .
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Haha..Thanks mann!! π
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I loved this.
I’ve never been able to crack the poem formula, but you’re a master.
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I’m so flattered! Thankyou Thankyou! π
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Well done and welcome back.
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Thankyou!ππ
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You’re welcome
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Wonderful poem! π
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Thankyou! π
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This is really good.
Simple yet beautiful! π
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Thankyou so much! π
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Your silence is like a roar.. Love that line
This is written with the most tender passion.. It’s beautiful
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Thankyou so much! π
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Very welcome πππ
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Amazing
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Thankyou!βΊβΊ
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Amazing one
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Thankyou! π
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Vei nyc.. lyk it!π
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Thankyou!π
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Great poem. This is my first time visiting but definitely not my last!
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Thankyou so much! ππ
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Wonderful! Great and expressive.
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Beautiful expression
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Hi… No post since long time… How have you been? Hope you are doing good..
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