I often wondered what a magicland would look like,
I thought it would exsist in books and movies,
But you came into my life,like a ray of light,
You held my hand tight,we took a few turns in our journey together,
Before we found magicland.
The houses in magicland,light up into colours at night,
The people are like us,they’re in love,
But they say we’re too young,and should not rush up,
We ignore their smart remarks and walk into the woods,
The river that flows by,is the best place to meet you,
We sit on the rock,near the waterfall,
Getting lost into each other’s hearts.
You hug me everytime we meet,
I know you’ll never leave me,I can tell how you feel,
A part of me never thought that I’d be in love,
And we’d be in this magicland.
But,in this magicland,We both lost control,
And you left me all alone,I realized;
What I had when you were mine,
But It’s too late to get you back,
Because I have woken up from my dream now,
And you are in heaven asleep now.
❤ you have the power to make the reader glide through on the journey of your emotions! kudos 🙂
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That is so sweet of you to say that,Thankyou. Takecare. 🙂
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Nice poem on dreams of love. Magicland is a usually a make-believe world, and a time comes when one has to wake up.
“And you are in heaven asleep now”…is that your own experience?
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Thankyou,Yes maybe it Is.
“And you are in heaven asleep now”
That person doesn’t not exsist it’s my imagination that he is asleep in a beautiful place like heaven.It’s not my experience. 🙂
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Somebody in my family had this as a real experience…:)
Best wishes for 2016 to every young person like you. May all your dreams for love and success come true!
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Thankyou,wish you the same 🙂
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Nice reference to the Magicland, but who are you sending to heaven ? 🙂
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Thankyou,I’m sending no one to heaven,It’s just my imaination that the person is asleep in heaven and doesn’t know about me. 🙂
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That’s better 🙂
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Magicland sounds nice. Best wishes for 2016. xo
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Thankyou so much.Wish you the same.
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Nice Feelings.
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Thankyou! 🙂
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Welcome ji.
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Lovely. U r a magician too… A) u can make many any person fall for ur lovely heart
B) ur words has that magical power to make reader imagine all that u write .
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And you sir have the power to win hearts and make people happy! :-I’m so happy reading your comment! 🙂
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Arey… Kyu sharminda kar rahe ho Ji. I always wait for our post n comments.. Tum khush to main khush
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Lovely poem!! Thanks for following my blog! I just did a new post, free eyelash curler with any $50 purchase of makeup or skincare! 🙂 don’t want you to miss out 🙂 happy new year ♡♡♡
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I absolutely love your writing pieces they’re amazing. Keep it up 🙂
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Thankyou, I love yours too! 🙂
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Its wonderful to build castles in the air and dream of magic land . You have an elegant imagination.Jal
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Thankyou so much! 🙂
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You welcome.Be well and be safe.
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You too keep writing! 🙂
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That heaven line was bit misleading. i thought he died and went to heaven.The most beautiful place is always created by our minds right?
Wishing you and your family a wonderful 2016 simple girl 🙂
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I tried to keep the ending a little twisty
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Even as you fancy magic
Beware of the occult
Every person has a wind (spirit) backing em
Just make sure that the spirit leading you is good
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You’re right!
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Hi?
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He he
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Beautiful and loved it man
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Thankyou! 🙂
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Wow, such a good poem! I love the nice flow throughout the entire piece, made me really hooked 🙂
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I’m so happy it kept you hooked! 🙂
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Hi! If understood right you are a IT student. Would you tell me, what exactly programming language you learn?
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Yes,I’m currently learning Javascript,DBMS and web designing.
And I have done the basics of C++!
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I would like to talk about web designing a little bit with someone, but I’m afraid that may be this comment section is not the right place.
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I can delete the comments later, we can freely talk about web designing!
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A time ago I thought what it will mean exactly for a young person to be a web-designer. I came to the conclusion that probably it will mean to work like developer for some of the currently existing big web platforms like wordpress, joomla, tumblr and so on, rather than to have a his own small web-design company. What do you think?
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Outstanding 🙂
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Thankyou! 🙂
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Welcome 🙂
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That is exotic. Piece of art. ❤
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Thankyou so much! 🙂
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This is very beautiful
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Your words had the depth that I rushed to read the comments to see if it is fiction or real. The last line had a meaning that should never be real 🙂
Always love the simplicity that flows through your touching posts 🙂
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I’m hearing from you after a really long time,Thankyou so much Prateek! 🙂
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Equal pleasure to read your penned thoughts after such a long time. Hope you are doing good 😃
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Wow, incredible. I love your thoughts 🙂
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Thankyou so so much! 🙂
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That’s a good dreams..I liked it
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Thankyou so much! 🙂
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You are welcome
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🙂
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