I often wondered what a magicland would look like,
I thought it would exsist in books and movies,
But you came into my life,like a ray of light,
You held my hand tight,we took a few turns in our journey together,
Before we found magicland.

The houses in magicland,light up into colours at night,
The people are like us,they’re in love,
But they say we’re too young,and should not rush up,
We ignore their smart remarks and walk into the woods,
The river that flows by,is the best place to meet you,
We sit on the rock,near the waterfall,
Getting lost into each other’s hearts.

You hug me everytime we meet,
I know you’ll never leave me,I can tell how you feel,
A part of me never thought that I’d be in love,
And we’d be in this magicland.

But,in this magicland,We both lost control,
And you left me all alone,I realized;
What I had when you were mine,
But It’s too late to get you back,
Because I have woken up from my dream now,
And you are in heaven asleep now.

57 thoughts on “Magicland.

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  2. That heaven line was bit misleading. i thought he died and went to heaven.The most beautiful place is always created by our minds right?
    Wishing you and your family a wonderful 2016 simple girl ๐Ÿ™‚

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  3. Your words had the depth that I rushed to read the comments to see if it is fiction or real. The last line had a meaning that should never be real ๐Ÿ™‚
    Always love the simplicity that flows through your touching posts ๐Ÿ™‚

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