Endlessly dark sky,
Waiting for the sun to shine,
The hue is gloom,
In the natures eye.
The birds they fly,
To the muse of the soft wind,
Which meets the trees that stand high,
In the natures eye.
The water falls,
Making its way into the river,
A melodious tune they create together,
In the natures eye.
Alive now in all their senses,
The trees,the birds,
The sky,and,the River,
In the natures eye.
The homely earth,
A peaceful place,
To birth,to live and to die,
In the natures eye.
What a description of nature .. Wow. Mesmerized
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Thank Youuu! 😊
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This is what i call “A writer’s write up”… beautiful creativity… 🙂
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Wow,Thankyou so much,It means a lot to me. 🙂
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I have nominated you for 3 day quote challenge… check here… https://ashishvision.wordpress.com/2015/06/28/3-day-quote-challenge-day-3/ 🙂
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Cool! So naturely! 👍😄👌
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Thankyou so much! 😀
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It’s amazing
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Thankyou! 🙂
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very nice!
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Thankyouu! ☺
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Creative and peaceful … well done!
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Thankyou.It means a lot to me.:)
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It’s beautiful 🙂
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Thankyou so much.Your comments always mean a lot to me. 🙂
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I re-blogged it 🙂 This is something that more people should see !
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I can’t Thankyou enough.You’re such an amazing person to share my poems. 🙂
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Good stuff has to be shared 😉 🙂
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😊🌹🌼
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I also loved It’s a girl .. I re-blogged that too
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Reblogged this on jeezcynthi and commented:
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Just beautiful 🙂 and of course the sketch is fabulous !
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Thankyou so much. 🙂
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Beautiful poem.
🙂
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Thankyou so much! 🙂
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Wow.
Wow.
I’d say more, but…
Wow.
Maybe I can further express how much I’m impressed by your writing by informing you that I’ve nominated you for the Encouraging Thunder Award! Like every other WordPress award, it’s optional, but if you wish to accept, just follow this link for the rules:
https://gabriel360live.wordpress.com/2015/06/22/thunder-thunder-thunder/
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Hey,Thankyou so very much for so many wows.
And I can’t thankyou enough for nominating me for this award.I feel so good. 😊
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Great post! Also I nominated you for the Sisterhood of the World Bloggers Award! https://forevershannon.wordpress.com/2015/06/23/the-sisterhood-of-the-world-bloggers-award/
Have a great day 🙂
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Nice message effectively conveyed through the beautifully written poem. In the race for material things, we often forget to appreciate the gifts of nature.
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I totally agree with what you’ve said.
Thankyou for reading my poem 🙂
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Wonderfully written, Drishti! The sketch is also looking cool 🙂
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Thankyou so much sarang,It means a lot to me. 🙂
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A marvelous treat–to see through Nature’s eye.
Lovely!
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I love reading your blogs.They’re amazing.
Thankyou. 🙂
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It’s beautiful. Sketch is also very nice.
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Your comment means a lot to me.Thankyouu! ☺
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🙂
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Pritty
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☺😁
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Kudoz to your friend for making such a deep sketch. The eyelashes made up of trees and birds; the water flowing as tears into the river below – superb.
And as always, your magical words create the mesmerizing and serene effect. Another beautiful peace from you 🙂
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Thankyou so much and also from the behalf of my friend who made this..
You’ve understood the poem so correctly.
Your comments make me so happy Prateek.☺
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It’s the best thing to hear from me 🙂
You deserve the praise you get 🙂
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Oh,God I can’t Thank you enough for what you say through your comments. 🙂
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You can. By just continuing the awesomeness through your posts 😀
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I surely will. 🙂
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Very Beautifully written!!
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Thankyou so much. 🙂
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This is an amazingly beautiful poem! Great job.
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Thank you so much. ☺
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Awesome
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Thankyouu! 😁
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U r welcome
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Reblogged this on JamesLantern40:The Journey To Radical Grace!.
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Lovely poem… The sketch complements it’s perfectly.. simply mesmerising
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The sketch is the reason I could write this poem. 🙂 Thankyou so much for your lovely comments! 🙂
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😙😙😙😙
Keep writing ❤
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Surely will! You too keep writing! 😘😘
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😇😇❤❤
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Amazing poem. . Beautiful description of nature nd the sketch complements it perfectly 🙂
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Love it! I have entered you into a bloggers challenge. I would love to see your poetry done in this format. I’m not saying that you have to do poetry for the challenge but with your talent, I would love to see what comes out. Have fun and enjoy 🙂
https://bjgaulton.wordpress.com/2015/06/27/allergic-to-the-e-challenge-in-school-by-blair-gaulton/
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Wow,Reading your comment I have to say I’m so flattered.Thankyou so much! 😊
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Wow! that sketch is amazing
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Yess ,Indeed it is.
Thankyou so much! 😉
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😊😊
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Beautiful words describing the essence and beauty of Nature. As Einstein once said “Look deep into nature, and then you will understand everything better”! I am sure you have looked deep into nature 🙂
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The sketch helped me a lot as well.Thankyou so much.
And that was a wonderful quote from Einstein. 🙂
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Beautifully written! 🙂
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Thankyou so much. 🙂
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Your work is mesmerizing
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Yours as well is. 🙂
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Poem is ecstatic ….and an amazing sketch 🙂
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Comes from a fine wordpress site,Thankyou. 🙂
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🙂
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Amazing description of nature & Beautiful Sketch
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Thankyou so much Mohit,You write beautiful blogs. 🙂
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